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Post by Paranoidm on Nov 9, 2004 16:27:44 GMT
Well defined, well written and a brilliant explanation of what anarchism actually is. It's not chaos, it's not insanity, no matter what people in power may want us to think.
A fine article Comrade Minister The Red Factions. And thanks to Comrade Dalioranium for putting it in the library!
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Post by Paranoidm on Nov 9, 2004 16:31:56 GMT
And i still think we should make a new section for discussion of library articles! ;D
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Post by Dalioranium on Nov 10, 2004 2:49:33 GMT
Haha, I shall look into it. But it could also go into the Discussion center, dont you think? I enjoyed it as well, though I have to admit I was tempted to edit it a bit. Certain sentences were a bit run-on, and could use a general sprucing up. But dont let that get you down, or at all.. I am a perfectionist when it comes to my work, and I am a fanatic on essays and whatnot.
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Post by The Red Factions on Nov 10, 2004 10:46:33 GMT
I think such discussions can actually go in the Discussion center.
And since English is not my first language, you can't expect me to write a masterpiece and I'm not even familiar with the expression "run-on" and general "sprucing up". So you'd have to explain to me what exactly you are meaning.
*Readies his sword* ;D
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Post by The Hypercube on Nov 10, 2004 14:44:27 GMT
Red Factions: The message it gives is excellent. It is true, that some of the grammar and spelling was off, but I did not have trouble understanding it. I personally see nothing wrong with someone editing it for spelling and grammar in cases where the meaning is obvious, and otherwise, with RF's consultation. I am proud to have you in TPC.
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Post by The Red Factions on Nov 10, 2004 16:01:17 GMT
Heh, I just spotted my errors after a third re-reading. I should have re-read it more carefully and I find no problem with Dalioranum editing it. Actually, I'd like him to edit it to wipe off any misstakes within the text! ;D
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Post by Dalioranium on Nov 10, 2004 18:23:55 GMT
Fair enough, I will do that when I get some free time.
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